FEEDBACK POEM NO. 1
We will explore ways to make this more legible.
We will explore different ways to make this more clear.
We will create banners for each type.
We will explore different placements and treatments.
We will explore better ways to balance the elements.
We will explore different ways to communicate this but it has been difficult.
We will explore ways to make these more similar.
We will revise.
We believe that it is prominent enough. Adding it again would be redundant and add unnecessary clutter.
We would like to keep this language here.
We will add this.
We will revise.
FEEDBACK POEM NO. 2
Move forward with the concept
However, please provide more contrast
between the body
Move forward with
You’re invited
You’re invited to test
Make the user feel special and know that he is amongst a select few
Move forward with “Hi, I’m Allison.”
Move forward with “Chat now”
Add language to inform the user that they have been “specially selected”
Move forward with the concept
Add language
You have been chosen
Hi, I’m Allison
Please provide more contrast
Oh, it’s so funny to be seeing you after so long, girl
And with the way you look, I understand that you were not impressed
But I heard you let that little friend of mine
Take off your party dress
I’m not gonna get too sentimental
Like those other sticky valentines
‘Cause I don’t know if you are loving some body
I only know it isn’t mine
Allison, I know this world is killing you
Oh, Allison, my aim is true
Thank you Elvis Costello!
You with the sticky valentines!
Beware the humorous verse. It will teach you some lessons.